Comments on The Bridge

I like your imagery, all your little details support your story very well.
Very, very nice.

Chastity

Good dialog. I liked showing the journey or the confusion through the conversation. Nice twist. I always enjoy when the story takes me somewhere I don't expect.
Tirgesfu

 I was surprised.

 LouBeller

I really enjoyed this, I read it with interest, anxious to get to the next part to see what was happening.  Your use of dialog is great and the story moved along very well. Great job.

Kathy

Boy, I hope dying isn't really that confusing! You had me going, there, thinking that Peter had died and was going to Heaven -- if he didn't screw it up! ::lol:: Good job!

 Novl Cypher